The author doesn't even know how to correct something so simple, he can create literally any excuse, but he creates one that doesn't solve the problem. The explanation in the "spoiler" part will make this more understandable, and Honestly, if you are used to good novels or at least one where the author cares about cohesion, I recommend reading the spoilers, nothing too revealing and can spare you from reading this. The author realized his mistakes in one instance, but instead of writing something correcting like using a sentence that made us see something now, that happened in the past, he inserts a solution in the storyline AFTER the problem. If the series of events changes without explanation, then how can the reader understand or keep up with the plot? And it is only chapter 31 guys. There's no way you can read a story where a character (one of the very few) goes to war, and the next day he appears in the house and no explanation is given to the reader. more> a given especially since these novels are usually too long to keep track of everything, and not really a professional book so my expectations usually are low enough regarding them, but this one was surprising in a bad way. Look, plot holes are common, I honestly don't mind them too much. For me was like a 10 yo wrote this with no regard for things he wrote before, just making up as he goes. I kept waiting for them to be corrected or for new information to come along and correct it, but no. BUT what stands out is this :Ī LOT, of obvious plot holes. There are other problems, and other qualities too.
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